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possible realism attempt? idek...by =vinylah

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Well i just wanted to draw something realistic looking... this is really only my third time doing it... :/ just learned how to do features in art this year...
and im very aware that this picture still contains several cartoonish elements but kjdshfkhgsakd i think the eyes are too far up on the head- but im looking for critiques~!! so please HONESTLY tell me what u think Dx constructive criticism is like candy to me<3
©2012-2013 =vinylah
Category: Traditional Art / Drawings / People

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Critique by =Jiyuuriachan Nov 27, 2012, 4:54:58 AM
i agree with you when you say that the eyes are too high up on the head. I think that you should lower all the facial features just a tad and then bring the eyes down to the bridge of the nose. one of the elements of cartoons is the fact that their eyes are generally place above the nose. also the hair is very carton/anime style. it needs to have more definition and.... hair. You just define the ends of the hair but leave to top blankish. The individual strands need to be more defined. I like it though.. :3
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~Misfit2-1 Nov 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, I really likes this, the cartoony elements make this look really good :)
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=vinylah Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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T-thank you :iconasdfghplz:
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~lahula Nov 26, 2012
this is really nice!
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=vinylah Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks~ ;w;
(love ur icon btw xDDD )
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~lahula Nov 27, 2012
thanks! :D
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